Dec. 8th, 2004 (UTC)

  • 5:13 PM (UTC)
Hi there. I just watched this and wanted to leave some feedback for you, I hope this is an ok place to do it.

I really liked what you were doing here, and I thought you chose a lot of good moments showing how Mal really does seem to have a guardian angel watching over him (I think the scene from 'Serenity' where the guy next to him gets shot is especially telling - it's at that moment that Mal gives up on his faith, and yet it's when he's most protected).

The scenes from Out of Gas were also excellent, very poignant. I noticed you used all elements of physical danger, instead of emotional (like when Kaylee is injured). I also love your slowing down of the War Stories clip at 1:08; dragging that scream out like that makes it especially painful. You also do a great job with fades and cross-fades.

I was, however, confused about what you were 'saying' with the vid - I thought starting out it was going to be a Mal and his guardian angels video, and then it seemed to bounce back and forth between that and Mal and Serenity as his guardian angel. I guess those aren't mutually exclusive ideas, but for me at least, I spent a lot of time trying to peg it as one or the other. I can be anal that way. ;)

I thought it was good, thanks for sharing it!


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